Wednesday, December 8, 2010

my quidage


Quiddage is so cool. I just wish that I could pick a different topic next time cause my business got so boring after a while . Hardly anyone came to our business but Linda. We did very good but Linda gave half of the Snidges.

We got 700 on our first one but we started to get higher and higher yay.


The l@soupers are the most attraction in Quiddage and so are the Fizzders . hmmmmmm next time I might think about food. Food is the most attraction in QZealand.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Athletics day

It was finally athletics and after all that training it was finally time to shine.
I hopped into the bus.I was siting with Linda and Eden quit happily squashed.
Finally we hopped out of the bus and we walked down to our markeys .
It was a nice hot boiling day for athletics after what happened last year .

Our teacher for the day was Mrs Bradshaw .
My first activities was high jump I got over it the first time but the second time I just hit the bar so like usual I got a one ohhhh.

Thursday, November 4, 2010

my speech assessment!!! :)

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

* Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

* Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:


Self Assessment from video

Speech in front of class

Success Criteria:

Speech Writing

My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced

yes

yes

The point I was making was easy to understand

yes

yes

My speech contained research

yes

yes

My speech had voice and was interesting

1/2

1/2

My speech was in my words

yes

yes

My big idea comes through strongly

Yes

yes

Presentation

I enunciated my words clearly

1/2

1/2

Terminal consonants


Ts and ds in the middles of words


Swallowed my goobies first


Seperated my words


My voice was loud enough

yes

yes

I learnt my speech off by heart

no

no

I used expression in my voice

yes

Yes

I used enough volume to be heard by all

yes

yes

I used eye-contact

yes

yes

My speech was not too fast, not too slow

1/2

1/2

My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes

No

no

My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words

yes

yes

Total:



Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech

my video

Thursday, October 28, 2010

my pi matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

my term 3 pI

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

my home learning %

for home learning % . I got 93 % .

what did I do well : I got 93 %.
what is my next step: to get 100%.
what did I learn:to do my homework everyday.

Monday, October 11, 2010

my tearm 3 goal selfassessment

what did I learn: I learn t that it takes a will to get up but I did not achieve it.
what did I do well: I tried my best.
what is my next step: to try to achieve my goal.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Tuesday, September 14, 2010

my best writing


What did I do well: used similes and full stops and capital letters.
What did I learn I learn t that we had to at lest have similes.
What is my next step: to write netter

Sunday, September 12, 2010

My Best Vis Lang term 3

what did I learn : that I have to use bright beautiful colors and colour in the same direction
what did I do well : I used bright beautiful colors
what is my next step: to color in the same direction

my spelling test

i think I did well because I got 41 right and I did better than last time

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Sunday, August 29, 2010

my fittness 2010


what did I learn:that you have to bend your elbows
what did I do well:I was speedy at the shuttle run
what is next learning step:to learn how to juggle a soccer ball

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Self assessment for my Hf %

for my home fun percentage I said

I got 94 % and I think that I did well because I got 100 snidges .


But I think that I could have done better because anyone could write that like a junior.

Self assessment for my Hf %

Self assessment for my Hf %