Wednesday, June 23, 2010

my descriptive writing

what did I do well:I put fullstops and capital letters.
what is my next step:to put more similes in.
what did I learn:that it doesnt have to be big.

Sunday, June 20, 2010

my best handwritting / visaul languge

The reason why I choose this one is:because it is my neatest work n my book with no cross outs and because it is the best visual language in my book.Because it is nice and bright and really beautiful.That's why I choose this one.

Thursday, June 3, 2010

cross country

What did I do well:I did not come last.
What did I learn:That you have two swing your arms back and ford.
What is my next learning step:To come in the top 10