my pi feedback

Comments
What a great topic, Natalya. It was very clear that the kids were very interested. Fantastic visual presentation. You spoke clearly and confidently. Congratulations. TC
maybe you could put some more info in your pi not very intersting . interesting PI and very colourful adain .thomas
we thing it was cool natalya because the flowers changed colour harry chaz
cool pi natalya. the green & purple flower looked cool. a bit more info wood of made it awesome. very interesting. alan caleb
we enjoyed your pi it was intrasting and it had some info Alana&Linda
we think that was auesome but next time speak loder and give more information but apart from that it was AUESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Sophie,Sara
Well done Natalya We thought it was so cool. You did somthing very different to everyone else. Awsome!. Libby and Kate
I think you put a lot of effort into it I liked the flowers and you spoke very clearly and a good speed well done!!! Hadley
You had a great tipic we though you did well bbut next time a little more info great pi grace and zia
kool flowers i did that once with white pansies and they turned green congrats natalya. I really liked the yellow flower also your pi was really KOOL. Hannah and emma
Great work Natalya that was really facsinating to learn about how to change the colour of a flower.Well done Nat,Kelly

term 2 goal

I am very proud of my work but my next step is to:put more pictures on it

my % for hf

For my HF % I got 94%.
I am very proud of myself but my next step is to:complete all of my HF.

My Writing Plan

What did I learn?:I learn't where you have to put fullstops

What did I do well?:I put Capitals and fullstops in the right place

What is my next learning step?:to not cross out in crosses