my quidage

Quiddage is so cool. I just wish that I could pick a different topic next time cause my business got so boring after a while . Hardly anyone came to our business but Linda. We did very good but Linda gave half of the Snidges.

We got 700 on our first one but we started to get higher and higher yay.

The l@soupers are the most attraction in Quiddage and so are the Fizzders . hmmmmmm next time I might think about food. Food is the most attraction in QZealand.

Athletics day

It was finally athletics and after all that training it was finally time to shine.

I hopped into the bus.I was siting with Linda and Eden quit happily squashed.

Finally we hopped out of the bus and we walked down to our markeys .

It was a nice hot boiling day for athletics after what happened last year .

Our teacher for the day was Mrs Bradshaw .

My first activities was high jump I got over it the first time but the second time I just hit the bar so like usual I got a one ohhhh.

my speech assessment!!! :)

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:

		Self Assessment from video	Speech in front of class
Success Criteria:
Speech Writing
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced		yes	yes
The point I was making was easy to understand		yes	yes
My speech contained research		yes	yes
My speech had voice and was interesting		1/2	1/2
My speech was in my words		yes	yes
My big idea comes through strongly		Yes	yes
Presentation
I enunciated my words clearly		1/2	1/2
Terminal consonants
Ts and ds in the middles of words
Swallowed my goobies first
Seperated my words
My voice was loud enough		yes	yes
I learnt my speech off by heart		no	no
I used expression in my voice		yes	Yes
I used enough volume to be heard by all		yes	yes
I used eye-contact		yes	yes
My speech was not too fast, not too slow		1/2	1/2
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes		No	no
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words		yes	yes
Total:

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech

my video

my pi matrix

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Reads the words on the PowerPoint or Glog

Clearly started at the last minute

 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

my term 3 pI

my tearm 4 goal :)