my descriptive writing

what did I do well:I put fullstops and capital letters.
what is my next step:to put more similes in.
what did I learn:that it doesnt have to be big.

my best handwritting / visaul languge

The reason why I choose this one is:because it is my neatest work n my book with no cross outs and because it is the best visual language in my book.Because it is nice and bright and really beautiful.That's why I choose this one.

cross country

What did I do well:I did not come last.
What did I learn:That you have two swing your arms back and ford.
What is my next learning step:To come in the top 10

my movie

This is an Expreamint with my friend Alana

My natures forces link

http://qzealand.edu.glogster.com/earthquakes/

my self assessment

what did I learn : That earthquakes can not only happen on land they can also happen in seas.
what did I do well : I did the video well.
what is my next learning step :To put more science.

PI self assement

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Novice
 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear